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.::Eagle Eye::. by Takamin .::Eagle Eye::. by Takamin
hmm..Just practicing more on my character = P
now with a head band or a bandage xD
and experimenting styles with hair and others.. = D
done nearly 1 1/2 hours (:
in ball point pen :dummy:

heres some previous works of him ^^
-[link] in suit
-[link] this when he was young xD (bottom left)

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Character/Drawing =Takamin 8-)
(need to catch up on A-T and Rqst)
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:iconscarlet-wings-kaili:
There's quite a bit that I love about this work
1)I love the the expression on his face.
2) I love the shading, the cross hatching is really well done.
3) I like how you shaded the mouth
4) Your lines are really clean and clear (no hesitant lines) which makes it look great!

Suggestions
1) maybe the ear needs to be bigger
2) I don't know how to phrase this without making it confusing but the skin under your chin doesn't dip in so there should be some meat between the chin and the neck.
3)make the head band a little lighter to allow for contrast. Of course, you can't really change it now, but just a thought.
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19 out of 20 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconnekoxichigo:
This wonderful deviation is what caught my eye, and I stared at it for quite some time in fascination :meow: I love how you did his hair, truly. I love spiky hair, but many many people cannot really get it right. You certainly did. The shades are good :thumbsup: The eye, eyebrow, nose and mouth are great~ Love that eye. His look is very cool, I like it. The head band is good, and the hair looks natural in the way that it hangs over the band in some areas. The ear may need a little tweaking, but it doesn't effect the picture, I was staring at it that long is all ;p
Overall, this is an awesome piece of artwork, keep up your epic work~~!
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3 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconjuanilla:
Juanilla Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
It's incredible!!!!
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GXRogue Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Interface Designer
How do you do this! 
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:iconanimalovex:
Animalovex Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist
I luv this
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:iconkirowatsui:
KiroWatsui Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Artist
Epic~~~! Clap
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:icondanieljaganshi:
danieljaganshi Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice! Gostei!
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:iconlegomaestro:
legomaestro Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I remember finding this some time back... Did you have an earlier DA account? I remember being dissapointed I didn't see more art. Glad that you kept at it! Ballpoints are such a great medium.
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Chibis-World Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't done cross hatch work since I was in Commercial Art in 05. .-. Truly amazing.
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:iconlucyxheart:
LucyxHeart Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
such a amazing drawing! ^^
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Tiki444 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow! ♥♥♥
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:iconphanchi:
phanchi Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your art style, keep up it up (Y) :D
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:iconcypernelli:
Cypernelli Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great work!
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:iconzairockgal:
zairockgal Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow and Wow! OoO They are all awesome!!! Keep up a great work!
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:iconaegis-the-hero:
Aegis-the-hero Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how you did his hair
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:iconbkresnik:
BKresnik Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Professional General Artist
awesome
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:iconjanrrah18:
janrrah18 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Filmographer
Wah!!! AWESOME!!!! I should add you to my watch list!!! I wish i could draw as you do!!! :iconfinallyplz:

I'm pretty sure i could learn many things from you!!! :iconloveloveplz:
And to add HIS HOT!!!! :iconpervplz:!!!!
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:iconbryansurya:
bryansurya Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agreed with you..
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:iconmrlambchop:
MrLambchop Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
man like i thought i was okay at drawing then i saw this and like .....Mind = Blown
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:iconsouleaterhd:
SouleaterHD Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Hello, this work is amazing La la la la 

You give the permission for me to color your work? :D (Big Grin) 
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:icontakamin:
Takamin Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
hey thanks man! :D
sure why not~ lemme know when your finished! :dummy: can't wait to see it hehe :aww:
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SouleaterHD Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I have finished my color: souleaterhd.deviantart.com/art…

^^
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Joshagaren Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome!!!! *_*
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:iconsquirtle1997:
squirtle1997 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Artist
wow
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:iconshenaniboom:
ShenaniBOOM Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
You have a lot of cool character designs! This one is one of my favorites ^^
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:iconcoldcoldsoul:
ColdColdSoul Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Stunning as always
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:iconyellowsmoke321:
yellowsmoke321 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome hair !
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:iconforwantofsilence:
forwantofsilence Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful work

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:iconemotality4everz:
Emotality4everz Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nice love your Art as always :D Hey, I know this is a lot to ask but i was hoping you accept request? If you could draw my O.C Shiro Hatakaro? It would mean so much if you can out of your busy schedule.
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azura11 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
awesomeeee *^*
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:iconmizurikeiti:
MizuriKeiti Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student
Wow.. Good Art.. Clap :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconshayola:
Shayola Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my gosh, i love the details of the hair, but the best part is his eye and the way it pops out of the pic :D really amazing! :clap:
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Kawamanimes Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing art, great and fine lines, astounding hatching. Would you allow me to do a cover of this drawing ? I'll give you full credit when i post it :D I am looking forward to reading your response. Watched :D
God Bless :heart:
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:icontakamin:
Takamin Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Heey thank you soo much! I saw it and insta faved it well done really nice to see my characters in color as well ^^ keep it up :hug:
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Kawamanimes Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg haha i think you replied to the wrong comment brother :D
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:icontakamin:
Takamin Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
omg so sorry its just I have so many messages to reply and I get mixed up ^^; but
about your previous comment, sure!! you can draw or do anything you like on my drawing :)
I cant wait to see it ^^ lemme know when your done yeah! :D good luck!! :clap:
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Kawamanimes Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's okay :D Thank you for your permission i hope you'll like it, i'll let you know when i finish it of course :D
May Allah bless you :heart:
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:icontakamin:
Takamin Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Your welcome man help yourself! Cant wait to see it! :) and may Allah bless you as well inshallah :D
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Maryssa1194 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome!!! X3
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MidgetShinigami Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Writer
His hair looks cool. How do you not mess up with pen? That's something I pretty much consider impossible!
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:iconbablini:
Bablini Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg D: so amazing
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ZeekVampire Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014   Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful!!!! :iconhappyloveplz:
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:iconnik7772:
Nik7772 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This Should be a main character/ Boss in Final Fantasy :D
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prithwijitsarkar Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love your style! :)
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Mstkn Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love the expression on his eyes. And maybe on his face too. Because arts suppose to make you feel something, like happiness or sadness, or maybe depressed or angry. In my own opinion, arts, and I mean the real thing, are made not to impress but to express your feelings or your deepest thoughts. And you nailed it! The feels when I look at him. It's like I also feel what he feels. Goosebumps!! 

You're awesome!!
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Ayareturn Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
OMC ! I love his hair *___________* and his eyes *________________*
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hollyvalance Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
what shocks me the most is that this was made with a pen...
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:iconchanz-diri:
Chanz-diri Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like your style :D it's very unique
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:iconzeeshiking:
ZeeShiKing Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Masha Allah! Great work!
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:icontakamin:
Takamin Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you so much for support man!! :aww: apreciate it alot! and for the feature! 
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:iconzeeshiking:
ZeeShiKing Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome! :aww:
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lubabah Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
Wow.
U r just awesome!!!!
So cool
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